Friday Fictioneers: The Small Details

 

 

 

 

The Small Details

 

Valentine’s Day 2019 …

 

Zak took a break from his home-based art studio to set up a romantic meal for his new husband Brad. He put the finishing touches on the roses. It was all about the small details …

Brad’s key turned in the lock. Zak smiled to him warmly. It was all about the small details. He gave Brad a kiss …

Truth was Zak was as straight as a dye. A rich man can do wonders for an artist. One touch of that deadly glitter and he would be free to join his girlfriend Nat before midnight.

 

 

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40 comments on “Friday Fictioneers: The Small Details

  1. Iain Kelly says:

    A devilish twist Lisa, I like it! 🙂

  2. granonine says:

    Oy. Not nice, not nice at all 🙂

  3. Ha ha ha, the things that we do for love… of money 🙂

  4. draliman says:

    I didn’t see that coming. What a nasty chap!

  5. Abhijit Ray says:

    For money and break, one go a long way.

  6. pennygadd51 says:

    A good twist, Lisa. However, I fear Zak has forgotten to attend to the small detail of the police investigation of a suspicious death…

  7. Sandra says:

    Wow! that was a twist and a half.

  8. gahlearner says:

    That is a toxic relationship. Great twist, I love it.

  9. Dear Lisa,

    Zak’s a bit of a player, isn’t he? Methinks the spider will get caught in his own web. Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  10. csheldonblog says:

    interesting story and take on the picture…

  11. plaridel says:

    i guess a man’s gotta do what a man’s gotta do to survive.

  12. A romantic start and a deadly end! Excellent Lisa.

    Click to read my FriFic tale!

  13. Dale says:

    What a rat is that Zak!

  14. Nobbinmaug says:

    That’s why I would never marry a man. Oh, wait… That’s not why.

    Well played. Zak showed some real dedication to the scheme. Brad must have serious money if Zak married him to get to it.

  15. Well told and chilling – liked the refrain..’all about the small details’, it had a slightly sinister feel. Clever ending. Nicely done.

  16. subroto says:

    Aie yie yie! Now that was a twist. Deliciously evil, nicely done.

  17. I hope Zak and his girlfriend get caught! Great set up and amazing twist.

  18. StuHN says:

    Natalie better watch out if someone else catches Zak’s eye. Never heard “straight as dye” before.

  19. Ouch… doing it for money has a name I think

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