Linda’s prompt for SoCS this week…
Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is “door.” Write about a door you walked through this week that wasn’t your own.
I walked through the door of the past. Into the small town I grew up. So familiar and yet now so far away. A certain amount of new places, many still the same. A few old faces. Many new. The seat in the centre of town once black, now pink. The roads and layout still the same. Had my dinner from the Chinese takeaway I loved in my last few years down there. Had a meal with my Mum and sister where we used to eat. Done a few bets in the bookies I used to go to with my Dad. Walked through many doors …
Walked back through the door to my now and my future. Will walk back through the door of the past again come June.
Gabrielle was full of glee as we arrived in Karlovy Vary for our ‘health experience’. Course leader Anna Novak was the queen of ‘getting healthier by hard work’ on YouTube and my health-obsessed girlfriend had booked us in for a week-long spa holiday at her spa, Peace & Tranquility Resort. I’d have much rather have came here and indulged on cuisine but I kept that to myself.
“Anna, this is my girlfriend Kate.”, Gabrielle said, introducing me to Anna.
“We watch your videos on YouTube all the time.”, she added.
She watches. I sit there with a doughnut.
Anna and I shake hands while I long for the imaginary doughnut in my head.
Soon we are in our room in the spa.
“After the first day, you’ll enjoy it.”, Gabrielle says, giving me a kiss as we unpack.
“Yeah.”, I agree.
Ah, the things you do when you’re in love.
In response to the What Pegman Saw writing prompt:
In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a unicorn. It can be realistic or fantastical. Go where the prompt leads.
Like The Unicorn
She knew like the unicorn she would be hunted and many would try to bring her down. She also knew there was many who liked unicorns. She knew that like the unicorn, she was strong. She knew she would battle to the end against the prejudiced and the brainwashed who thought different of her because of one simple thing, that she was pansexual.
No one would stop her spirit … stop my spirit. I am me and like the unicorn I will glide through every forest and every storm.
Unicorn: Strong, fragile, human. Living, refusing to be made feel bad.
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Echo Volume 2: The Taste of Ashes (2016) by Kent Wayne is the second installment in the Echo trilogy. It is a slightly more introspective book with more focus given to the action but is just as intriguing as the first outing.
Now first thing’s first, you will need to have read the first book in the trilogy before this one to understand what is happening in this book so that’s definitely something I’d recommend because otherwise you might be lost. Our protagonist Atriya continues his introspective, spiritual journey as he heads into the Wastes which is a dangerous area where murderers, rapists, gangs and cannibals are lurking around. The book is very detailed and gives the reader a real sense of what war must be like. It’s a very visual book.
One of the scenes which sticks with me is the murder of the homeless man near the beginning of the book. It’s very horrifying and shows the dangers of been in the wrong place at the wrong time. The book very much shows the good and evil in society throughout in a very real way. The reader also gets a great inside into Atrya’s mind through his introspection and all the conflicts he faces in the various situations he finds himself in.
The entire book is set in one day. From a writer’s perspective, I have to say that it shows remarkable talent to be able to fill so much detail and scenes into just 24 hours. Kent does an excellent job of that in this book. The writing has a great sense of cohesiveness. This book is very gritty and violent and it shows how fragile life is and how to some people other peoples’ lives aren’t worth much. And this is one of the many things that cause Atriya so much conflict in his head. From someone who has never been to war, and has no plans to go, it gives you a sense of what it must be like from afar and instills in the reader even more admiration for the people who do go to war in real-life because there’s a lot of braveness in that even if one’s a pacifist.
Yet again, another stunningly crafted book. Lots of action and yet lots of drama and human aspects too. Loved it and looking forward to book 3!
To purchase Echo Volume 2: The Taste of Ashes by Kent Wayne go to:
To read my review on Echo Volume 1: Approaching Shatter and get details on where to purchase it go to:
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A ‘feminist’ who isn’t for all women is just a fraud.
In response to Linda G. Hill’s prompt which can be found at:
In response to secretkeeper.net’s weekly writing prompt #129. The challenge is to use the 5 words given below (or their synonyms ) in a poem or flash fiction.
(5) Words: | CALM | ROUGH | STORM | EASE | MUTE |
The storm was brewing in his mind,
chaos in a blur,
the doctor tried to speak in a calm tone,
she tried to ease his fears
but all he heard was
‘cancer. Six months to live …’
and he became mute and unreachable,
his mind raced like rough seas,
I’ll never see my baby daughter grow up,
eventually my wife will meet another man
who my daughter will call Daddy.
In response to secretkeeper.net’s weekly writing prompt #128. The challenge is to use the 5 words given below (or their synonyms ) in a poem or flash fiction.
(5) Words: | FINISH | LOSS | BREAK | MOVE | TAME |
With him I find it hard to move on,
to make that break away,
want to say pathetically,
‘tame and soothe my broken heart … please’
but I won’t,
I feel the loss in silence
trying to make the pain come to an end
so I can happily put that chapter at a finish.